Thursday, September 26, 2013

A Silence of Three Parts and A Man of Three Parts: An Examination of the Use of Metaphor in the Prologue to The Name of the Wind



Metaphors shape our understanding of reality.  A well-constructed metaphor can reinforce previous notions of an idea or change the way the idea or subject is understood and thus how reality is understood or experienced, such as “silence is hollow,” because of this construction then silence can be filled, or silence can echoing. In the high fantasy series The Kingkiller Chronicle, author Patrick Rothfuss constructs a reality where magic and heroes exist and depicts the journey of his main character Kvothe from boy to legend to aging innkeeper.  His prologue “A Silence of Three Parts,” introduces the character and the setting through the metaphor of the silence surrounding the sleepy Waystone Inn.  Rothfuss maps the journey and introduces the complex nature of the man with “true-red hair” and eyes that are “dark and distant” through a multi-layered metaphor with silence at the center (Rothfuss).  Through this multi-layered metaphor, Rothfuss constructs a notion of silence that is complex and often contradictory, reflecting this nature onto his main character, Kvothe.
Rothfuss starts his definition of silence by dividing it into three manageable parts.  He begins with what he describes as “the most obvious part;” the first silence (Rothfuss).  The vehicles used to shape the meaning of this part of silence are the expected connotations of silence.  It is a hollow, echoing silence “made by things that were lacking” (Rothfuss).  Using “hollow”, “echoing”, and “lacking” to describe silence creates the expectation that something can and must fill that silence.  The Waystone Inn has a “hole running through” it; it has a void; something is missing (OED). Hollow can also imply that something is insincere, vain, false, or empty.  The Inn and its occupants are either lacking depth of character or are insincere about their motives and intentions. Rothfuss has references to music throughout the prologue and his books.  In relating music to hollow and echoing, Rothfuss implies that the piece, or silence, is not “full-toned” or does not have the full range of sounds; essential elements are missing from the song of the Waystone Inn, and it is merely repeating the sounds, or stories, that do exist.  The first silence is empty and hollow but it is also something tangible; it can be “brushed” down the road by a light wind. 
                The second silence is a small silence created by the men that are in the bar.  According to Rothfuss this “small, sullen” silence is added to the first one.  In a sense, this is filling in the hollow of the first silence (Rothfuss).  This silence is dull, gloomy, and serious.  It has a mournful tone.  It is small and therefore young; a new silence that wasn’t there before and is still being developed.  It is possibly of little importance, common and ordinary, or perhaps just humble. Rothfuss says that this silence creates an alloy, or adds to and perhaps diminishes the first silence.  This alloy could temper or moderate the other silence (OED).  He also refers to it as a counterpoint: “a melody added as an accompaniment” to fill in the tone of the hollow silence and in this it has to follow fixed rules (OED). 
                The third silence is the most significant but least obvious silence.  This silence requires one to “listen for an hour,” and maybe one can “begin to feel it in the wooden floor” (Rothfuss).   This silence has a weight to it; it is heavy and deep and wide. Deep and wide imply that the silence is profound, vast, it is “like autumn’s ending;” a slow and subtle transition into another part of life (Rothfuss).  This silence “wrap[s] the others inside itself” in its vastness and depth (Rothfuss).  It is not hollow, like the first, it is filled with the other silences.  This silence is capable of being possessed, and according to Rothfuss the third silence belongs to the man with “true-red hair” and with eyes that were “dark and distant” (Rothfuss).  The deep silence is a “patient, cut-flower sound of a man who is waiting to die” (Rothfuss).  Rothfuss ascribes this silence to the man and by doing so he creates a second level of metaphor in which the man is the tenor and silence as the vehicle. 
                By using silence to describe the man, Rothfuss applies all the vehicles used to describe silence to create the man.  As a boy, Kvothe was hollow and echoing.  He lacked the depth of character that he has and can again possess.  He is waiting to be filled, like the first silence.  The second part of his life fills that hollow space inside him.  This mixture, however, is an alloy; it is not pure and works to debase the innocence of his boyhood. He becomes a legend in the second part of his life; his adventures become the melody or counterpoint to the first hollow silence of his childhood.  In the second part of his life, he is the antithesis of what he was as a boy.  The third silence is the man, as the innkeeper, that is presented in the prologue.  His legendary adventures have shaped him into something that is weighty, deep, and heavy.  He is patient, and like a cut-flower he “is waiting to die” (Rothfuss).  The silence pervades him until it becomes him; however, like him the silence is a patient, cut-flower that is waiting to die.  This implies that the silence will fade and perhaps the adventure that Kvothe craves will be back in his life.  Rothfuss’s use of hollow and deep work to reinforce this notion of the adventure not being over for Kvothe; hollow and deep can both alternately mean “the middle or depth of night or winter” (OED).  If the man and the silence are hollow and deep, in the middle of winter, then there is light that will come with dawn.      
                Rothfuss creates a dynamic character for his audience through metaphor.  By using so many vehicles for the idea of silence, and by extension his character, he creates a dynamic and complex understanding of silence and men.  At some points the vehicles even seem to contradict themselves, silence, of Kvothe, is both small and wide, hollow and deep, an accompaniment and antithesis.  Silence is not something merely heard but felt; it has weight and texture shown in the “rough, splintering barrel” and wooden floor; it is quiet and echoing (Rothfuss).  Silence is music, deep and profound, but it is found lacking, something is missing and Rothfuss wants his readers to think about what that is. 

               
Works Cited
Oxford English Dictionary.  Retrieved 25 September 2013.  Web.
Rothfuss, Patrick. The Name of the Wind. New York: Daw Books, Inc. 2009. Print. 
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The Name of the Wind

Patrick Rothfuss
Prologue
A Silence of Three Parts
                It was night again.  The Waystone Inn lay in silence, and it was a silence of three parts.
                The most obvious part was a hollow, echoing quiet, made by things that were lacking.  If there had been a wind it would have sighed through the trees, set the inn’s sign creaking on its hooks, and brushed the silence down the road like trailing autumn leaves.  If there has been a crowd, even a handful of men inside the inn, they would have filled the silence with conversation and laughter, the clatter and clamor one expects from a drinking house during the dark hours of night.  If there had been music … but no, of course there was no music.  In fact there were none of these things, and so the silence remained. 
                Inside the Waystone a pair of men huddled at one corner of the bar.  They drank with quiet determination, avoiding serious discussions of troubling news.  In doing this they added a small, sullen silence to the larger, hollow one.  It made an alloy of sorts, a counterpoint.
                The third silence was not an easy thing to notice.  If you listened for an hour, you might begin to feel it in the wooden floor underfoot and in the rough, splintering barrels behind the bar.  It was in the weight of the black stone hearth that held the heat of a long dead fire.  It was in the slow back and forth of a white linen cloth rubbing along the grain of the bar.  And it was in the hands of the man who stood there, polishing a stretch of mahogany that already gleamed in the lamplight.
                The man had true-red hair, red as flame.  His eyes were dark and distant, and he moved with the subtle certainty that comes from knowing many things. 
                The Waystone was his, just as the third silence was his.  This was appropriate, as it was the greatest silence of the three, wrapping the others inside itself.  It was deep and wide as autumn’s ending.  It was heavy as a great river-smooth stone.  It was the patient, cut-flower sound of a man who is waiting to die.
 

Tuesday, September 10, 2013

Kairos and Decorum - Something Done in the Right Moment and the in the Right Way Makes All the Difference



Kairos

Kairos describes the right moment, or opportune moment.  In the above clip Sam refers to the moment in terms of time laps since a death to make an accident but kairos can refer to more than just time.  The moment was not right for the joke not just because the timing was bad but because the "feel" of recent death was not appropriatefor a joke.  In this case, six seconds is too soon.

If kairos refers to more than just time what else does it encompass?

Location plays a factor in determining kairos; it will probably never be the right time to make a 9/11 joke at ground zero.  The location of something, a speech on in front of important monuments, for example, can add weight or significance to what is being communicated.  A march on Washington is meant to get the attention of those working in Washington; it is a way of bringing the issues to the lawmakers doorstep. 

Rhetor and audience are a large determining factor in kairos.  Being able to read an audience, know what their interests, sensitivities, passions, age, economic class, jobs, relationships, political leanings, etc. are can change how a message is received.  Knowing yourself as a rhetor, what you are interested in at the moment and so on, will change what you want to discuss and the message you want to communicate.  These things can be fleeting or can remain the same over a lengthy course of time.  A rhetor takes into account all the shifts that can occur and uses them to his or her advantage when constructing a message. 

Kairos doesn't just determine what message may be the best but how to best convey a message; it determines what words, images, sounds, etc. may be best in any given situation.  According to rhetoric.byu.edu, "a speaker or writer takes into account the contingencies of a given place and time, and considers the opportunities within this specific context for words to be effective and appropriate to that moment." 

Kairos can be used as a means and tool of invention. Sharon Crawley and Debra Hawhee give some questions that may help a rhetor determine kairos and use it in invention:

"1. Have recent event made the issue urgent right now, or do I need to show its urgency or make it relevant to the present? Will history of the issue help in this regard?
2. What arguments seems to be favored by what groups at this time? That is, which communities are making which arguments? How are their interests served by these arguments?
3. What venues give voices to which sides of the issues? Does one group or another seem to be in a better positions - a better place - from which to argue? in other words, what are the power dynamic at work in an issue? Who has power? Who doesn't? Why?
4. What lines of argument would be appropriate or inappropriate considering the prevailing needs and values of the audience?
5. What other issues are bound up with discourse about this issue right now, in this place and in this community? Why?
 
Whether the kairos for a message exists and is obvious or whether a rhetor has to seek it out or create it, it is important to the creation and reception of a message. 


Decorum

Closely linked with kairos is decorum.  I said in kairos that how something is said is as important as what is said; kairos can help determine what the best way to convey a message; decorum, according to rhetoric.byu.edu, sets a structure for the  "pedagogy and procedures of [rhetoric] as much as it governs the overall uses of language." 

Like kairos, decorum considers a wide range of "social, linguistic, aesthetic, and ethical proprieties" and is tied to the rhetor and the audience.  Though decorum sets a standard, that standard can be considered to be on a continuum.   Word choices and linguistic composition that is appropriate for a message being conveyed in the street of west Phoenix will not be appropriate for the Senate floor; a student writer writing an informal paper uses a different manner of speech and has different word choice than a professional writer. 

Decorum is concerned with what is appropriate in any given rhetorical situation.  Because it applies to rhetorical situations as a whole, its considerations extend beyond word choice to include visual and auditory choices.  The phrase "may not be suitable for all audiences," for example, is a nod towards this idea of decorum, a warning that the following message is audience specific and that the creators of the message considered who their audience may be and perhaps should not be.  When considering what colors, fonts, words, and images to use, a graphic designer follows the standards of decorum appropriate for their target audience. Images intended for an older audience may not be appropriate for an ad target at school children and over-simplified ad campaigns may not appeal to a more educated audience. 

As important as rhetorical choices in regards to decorum must be appropriate for the rhetor and the audience, the choices should fit the situation.  A greeting card that is light hearted and drawn with cartoons may not be appropriate to send to someone that just lost a loved one; just as a serious and poetic card about love may not be appropriate to give when a relationship is new and uncertain. 

As we can see, the factors determining the appropriate use of words, images, videos, sounds, etc., are closely related to the factors that determine the kairos, or opportune moment, for a message.  What is said, how its said, when its said, and who its said to make a difference in how the message is conveyed.

Below is an amusing example of the standards set forth by decorum being overlooked in a newspaper headline. 



While Chick is the last name of the councilwoman that the article is about, the title conveys, perhaps accidentally, and inappropriate message.  There are better titles that could have been used and would have been more appropriate to the situation.